What's love gotta do with it?
The Sun's just started glowing
And Honey, I better be going
You look beautiful in the white gown
But I need to rush to the other part of town
I think I need a kiss
But today I shall give it a miss
Oh! and your food tastes great
But dear, tonite I'll be late
Lock the door when you are sleepin'
Coz I've got the keys to just sneak in
Darling, the world's in a tizzy
And everyone's just so busy
And I too gotta run
Before I can catch on the fun
But you can always buzz me
And I shall surely reply if I am free
Honey, dont miss me much
Coz a man's life is such
Perhaps the roses are red and the violets blue
But I gotta work because I so love you.......
posted by vinay @ 2:42 AM
14 comments
14 Comments:
:)
im really surprised henkel even gives u so much time to write poetry!!! ;)
maybe not the time...but surely the inspiration ..:)
[disclaimer - for a change, i have written something positive about your poem. so smile and read on!!]
you know what i did when i read this poem the first time? i read it again. no, not because i did not understand it. this is actually your only poem that i have understood in all these years!! i read it again because i felt i had sensed something while reading it the first time and wanted a confirmation. when i finished reading the second time, i knew it was true. each stanza of your poem is independent in itself. it doesnt need the rest of the poem to exist. each stanza can be read as a stand alone, can be enjoyed as a verse in itself. and i cannot say how delighted i felt when i realised this. vinay, i dont know whether you wrote the poem keeping this particular structure in mind. if you did, take a bow. if you dint, still take a bow. because this is really beautiful. almost ghazal-like because like each sher of a ghazal has its own individuality, each stanza of your poem has its own life. the sum of parts adds up to the whole and then goes beyond.
great to read this... how r u ??
aks.
he he...finally i write something comprehensible! Well, i had the theme in mind for quite some time but not the structure...words just started falling in place once i started! I am delighted that you are delighted :)
aks!! me good..why have you just dissappeared???? where are you????
A great read to pep up this lazy sunday morning! :)
so u in love?
he he...well, surely!...in love with the idea of love !:)
nice.....
seems to be very true
thanks deeps...:)
Vinay... I have just read one of them..... That was great... You really have an alternative career in hand:-)
Dude! you've been tagged!!! :)
http://catharsez.blogspot.com/2007/06/once-again.html
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